Long time not talk, lol
Your getting better man. Your delivery like Lipz said, could of been a bit better and sometimes it sounds like you get confused when your rapping and mix up words making it hard to understand you. In other words you need to work on your pronunciation. J-Kellz killed it. But you still did pretty damn good and your getting better.
5/5 - 4.17 / 5.00 (+ 0.065)